You Are Here. Day 9

You Are Here

I think that my animation would have turned out better if I had worked more on my character design. I will work on this for the final hand in.

I have been commended in the crit for the pacing of my animation, such as how it is slow and grey before he enters the ballroom and it is faster and more colourful  once he is inside. Also this flips the idea of ghosts and 1920's parties on the head (as when people think of these things they think 'black and white' because that is all that they were able to film in at the time).

My areas for improvement include improved character development (which I have mentioned before); the pacing of certain parts of the animation (such as when he opens the door it is too fast); some parts are slightly confusing such as when the woman trips, it s unclear whose foot it is over; also they felt that it ended to abruptly.

I aim to work to improve this for the final deadline.