In my final crit I was given the improvements of having a hand appearing at an earlier stage so that the audience could see that the land was always controlled by humans. This i feel is not really relevant to my work as the whole point was that he was in a place that was untouched by humans and then he passed over into a land that was dangerous and void of happiness and make-believe. Some people did not understand what had happened but I feel that it is just perspective, as all of the people that I have showed my work to previously could explain the storyline to me without being previously told, there were also people in the crit that could understand it; which shows me that the story is clear to most people. but i will work on the animation so that everyone understands.
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