Information in brackets is what I think of the comments given
Too much text, could have used voice overs instead; (I personally do not like voice overs as I find them really cheesy)
Use more images, different angles of the item etc
Nothing about how I feel about the item now, what effects it has on me now (I disagree with this as I feel I talked about this in my video)
- Crit for Interview
Quite jumpy (this happened while rendering, it is unnavoidable on most videos that I render)
Seemed disjointed from me ; more about my family. Made people more interested in my family's relationships than my past (I did not like the idea of this project so I aimed this video at something that was less about me and more about the people around me, so I do not feel that this is a complaint)
Comedy, all at the right time, knows when to be serious and when to put the jokes in. The jokes were well timed.
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